All Comments on 'A Day At The Beach'

A really good job of writing. Looking forward to your next attempt

I really like these characters, more?

Seriously good, sensuous writing.

I've only got 3 more of your stories to read, and I will read them, as you've piqued my interest, and other things.

Seriously, some of the best of these types of stories I've read in years.

Congrats.

Wow Ryan, 2 men on 1 woman fantasies are amongst my favourite types of erotic fiction. The way the characters gently, and slowly tease her, are fantastic. I wish I was the female character.

Good stuff. Well written.

Near the end, what I consider the unrealistic, two penises at one time instead of separately or something else is the reason I didn't rate it 5 stars.