All Comments on 'A Day At The Beach'

Just reading this I see her limits as though they were written down in a contract. That's not to say they couldn't be pushed. The obvious love that Master has for His property is what keeps her going. Makes Me wonder if there is a level that would test her commitment to Him. Good read and very neatly written.

A dutiful slut...I would love to be in her shoes

This is how I picture myself being submissive to my dom husband. He has control but with care, passion, & adventure. Your story kept me interested the whole way it never had a dull moment. Well written, I will be reading this over again soon.

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Nice hit of erotica! Uncomplicated lust with a bdsm twist. I like it! Thanks!

Yes, I gave it five stars. It was very arousing, but also well crafted with crisp dialogue. The characters were believable and I loved the integration of author's choice of music into the story. Highly Recommended.

A thoroughly enjoyable story. I rarely read Bdsm but followed your link from another site to this. I liked how this was all about the mental control and not gratuitous beatings.