All Comments on 'A Day in Paradise'

Very nice. The story doesn't detract from the steaminess, but it's still there to keep things interesting.

Just wanted to say that I enjoyed your story and read all 3 parts in 1 sitting. Will you be expanding on what he goes through that night?

Great!! I loved how you put this together...

This is one of the sexiest stories I have read. How I wish I could have been that kid. You just have to continue this story - tell us how he blackmailed Kim over the phone photos.

I love your story. I found it long ago and loved it and then lost it. I'm so happy it came up again on random search. I have now bookmarked it. I love the bit where one of the girls comes back up and he notices her nipple was shiny where it had been sucked on; that never fails to get me wet.

Hot. With a twist at the end.

Loved it! Ending was a little contrived but still a 5/5!