All Comments on 'A Day in San Pedro'

i loved the graphic details in the storie.

the writer is the eyes of the reader.

JUST HAD TO LET YOU KNOW, THAT YOU MADE ME HOT... I LIKED IT!

You are the best lesbian author I have ever read. All of your stories that I have read make me so wet and excited I can hardly stand it. I have been looking for another female lover like the ones you discribe for so very long. Thank you for your wonderful erotic stories. Ilove them all and masturbate to them frequently.

- Dana

try to avoid the -then we did this, then we did that- format

It was good, it was exciting but a little something was missing it left me wanting more, but keep up the good work!

A nicely paced soft erotic piece that is believable with a well-crafted story. But if you ever decide to re-write it, and it's worth it because it's potentially excellent, don't be afraid to ditch the less believable bit involving the male intervention to improve it.

Perfect setting...Belize is amazing...wish I had an experiance like that when I went!

Very skillful unveiling of woman's first-time encounter with a younger woman. Timidity and mixed feelings give way to the sheer pleasure of sensations, and not even an unexpected interruption spoils what builds. Bravo.

That was one of the sexiest stories I have ever read. I got so wet reading it I had to rub myself afterwards!

Ain't that considered rape?? :O

A little build up is good I really enjoy girl on girl sex. The fact that it had a man in it put me over the top.

Heather learned a lot about herself!

Sorry,, I couldn t do better then A 3 at the end,, this story was awesome till you put the reject in at the end that basically rapes her

I seen nothing of him asking if it was OK to join them,, he just started issuing orders

Rape no matter how you slice it

Oh and by the way ,I am male

I just love nice erotic lesbian stories

Started out great, had a great middle, then you ruined it by adding in the sex with the guy, rape in my book.

Two very likable characters-horny younger pursuing up till then straight hot slightly older, and Heather deciding she really liked it and her.

The man was quite an unexpected twist, but Heather didn't say no, and didn't seem to mind the sudden spit roasting...

Definitely going to check out more of your stories...

Smokin' hot!

I loved the whole thing until the guy came in and started ordering the women around!!

Should have just kept it 100% Lesbian!!

Goes really well - heading for a 5* - until the guy shows up. Then it's rapey and creepy. So not a 5* I'm afraid.