All Comments on 'A Day in the Life'

Loved your story......You absolutely must keep on writing.

Your stories just go from strength to strength with great characters, wonderful emotion and hot sex - who could want more?

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Such a sweet story. Its obvious this couple is in love.

you fall short with sex. must be very frustrated in your life.

A good telling about the ups and downs that life can bring.

Chapter two would be welcome!

Beautiful story. Well written and a joy to read. Well done.

I found ColdCat via a "more stories like this" and I have to say, even with the free stories she posted she showed herself to be in the top echelon at literotica. Lovely characters, full of sweetness and life.

Such a dear relationship. Like how the story ties to both families.

Beautiful little capsule story. Really skilled how so many characters have been fleshed out with such economy.

I was won over to this lovely story by the exchange 'Wow, what did I say?' / 'Just the right thing darling.'

So subtle and spare, and yet so detailed and moving too. A gorgeous piece of writing.