All Comments on 'A Death Wish'

It was a good story with lots of possibilities. I felt you ended it too fast. It felt like you were unhappy with the story and just ended it.

Hot! Fucking hot! I've been reading your other stories as well. I kept coming again and again...Haven't gotten any lately...exactly what I needed.

that is alive with plenty of eroticism.

and having a goo(d) time doing it. I always like happy endings the best. Fast enough to the peak and fast enough to sleep.

"I took out two short pieces of rope and tied her ANKLES to her CALVES. As I expected she was very limber."

Yeah, I'll bet she WAS limber! Actually, unless she has some kind of extra joint in her legs, this is a physical impossibility! He might be able to tie her ankles to her THIGHS, but to her CALVES...?

It was very good of him to have them remember everything. Good story.

This was an awesome story. Make more like it!

Lovely short story. I have to agree that there are many future possibilities. Love your writing.

I love the plot and the writing is not bad but please remember, our enjoyment of the story is adversely affected (not 'effected') by poor grammar, spelling etc

Women is the plural of woman. Please get an editor or use editing software.

I really like this kind of short story... Write more please