All Comments on 'A Demon's Embrace Ch. 03'

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MattigotMattigotover 9 years ago
Loving it

Completely enjoying this story, looking forward to reading where it heads to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
!!!

love it so far!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Just can't read any more of this without an editor. The author makes light of not having the patience for editing, but obviously doesn't understand how poor grammar or spelling disrupts a story. A title wave?! WTF is a title wave? Get an editor please.

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