All Comments on 'A Desert Tale'

Never thought of watching a spider as something erotic. Very interesting.

Beautifully written, perfect description. I was never sure if they knew each other or if she was some sort of feral wild woman stalking him. With the description of the wasp, the way she watched him enter the arroyo and how she blended in and her "attack" on him, she sounds like a lioness on the hunt. You've truly created erotic literature with this story. Brilliant work!