All Comments on 'A detour to Las Vegas'

by poontangpatty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot,but...

I was a hot story, but I can't believe that not one person in front of where he was fucking Suri & Mary didn't have the courage to get that gun which was easily in sight.

pawwriterpawwriterover 13 years ago

I think the name of the daughter was May.

poontangpattypoontangpattyover 13 years agoAuthor
@pawwriter

Did I mess up a name? if I did please let me know.

talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowover 10 years ago
Mostly Boring.

Yeah, yeah ... big-dicked ex-con gets Church ladies (girls) hot in spite of themselves and wrecks their "phoney" religious convictions.

A little heat and lots of junior-high rebellious attitude.

HisMrsBiBishHisMrsBiBishover 7 years ago
Despite the length <3

I liked it. Would have liked it more with less consent. It could have been shorter. All in all it was good.... what happens next? Do may and suri get into incest. Do Mrs. Tammy and the lesbian girl start having an affair??? Write us more.

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