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by londoneye

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PennLadyPennLadyover 14 years ago
Very sweet

Nicely done. You got the sense of urgency across very well.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 12 years ago
I hope you decide to write more stories.

You have a good command of the language and you seem to have a real connection with your story. These are rare qualities on this site.

timlaudertimlauderalmost 9 years ago
They died

the house burned down because they for got the tea

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