All Comments on 'A Different Plan'

Would love to read more -- anything you feel like sharing

Would love to see a second chapter, and possibly more. Refreshing story line.

well paced, especially for us older (mature) folks... genuinely reflects the possibilties of real life.. eagerly awaiting further news from this group of dear friends

Please continue ...it is well written - and has a good 'feel' to it.

You are painting a great picture...please continue

Thanks for sharing your story! Would like to learn more.

I am enjoying your story. I can't wait for chapter 2.

and I will go back to read it, I did read your preface, and seeing the words, "learning to grow and share," causes me to believe that you are going to "grow" in how to forget commitments, promises, vows that you have made and "share" in each others marriages. Now, back to the chase.

Unlike the prior commenter, both of us (husband and wife) read the story before commenting. First, it's a wonderful story. Second, the couples seem to be very respectful of their spouses, their friends and their vows. These seem like folks we would want to get to know.

We hope that such_good_friends will grace us with more.

I know all, and yet, I am completely wrong. Still, I am proud of myself for understanding what no one else knows, and wave it like a flag...

Really wonderful. Rich characterizations of people who accept themselves and each other, live their desires and their memory of the one who brought them together. And wonderful descriptions of settings. Please finish the story.

We thank you for your gracious comments. In response to your thoughts and requests, we have decided to continue on and will edit and submit the end of this particular episode in our shared experiences. Have a safe and joyous holiday. Gina, Paul, Susan, Charles, Liz, Ted, Ellen and Fred.

This is a very sophisticated story that, for me, outlines an agenda for an alternative way of life. It is intriguing; and I would like to see how it unfolds, and if you have any other prescriptions. It seems to me that if you have the right group of people to share with, you could live an extraordinarily pleasant life. Well done on finding the people, and for writing the case study for the rest of us.

We have just about finished part 2 of our story. Sorry for the delay, but one of us had a parent die and that set us back a month. Thanks for your patience. Ted

Part 2 is with the Literotica Editorial Staff. Watch for it soon.

A story where you care about the people, not just their organs!!

Let them all get laid with options for six months later.

Cannabis cures (some? all?) cancer. The Federal police in this country are charged with jailing anyone who does that.

And State police were once in the business too (some still are).

Carol might be with us today if the Government had behaved differently.

Liked the story so much I’m inviting my brother in-law and wife for dinner and who knows what might have for desert 😛

interesting concept started by Carol but dynamics changed by others, to something different. Will Ellen be satisfied with twice a year "affair" and stay married "faithfully" ?