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All Comments on 'A Different Shower'

by Middleagepoet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Short

Too short good detail but too short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I liked it but....

it's so much better with a slower start, and denser language. Seduction shouldn't just be, "Bend and relax..". Anal is a jump if you are scared.

Not saying the story is bad but experience will produce a better story from the same start.

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