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Anonymousover 3 years agoexcellent but too brief
The second chapter in this excellent romance story never drags for a moment, but its last three paragraphs are too brief, and could have been greatly expanded.
Rancher46over 2 years agoGood second chapter, also needed more detail at end to make continuation to the next chapter Well written. 5 stars
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