All Comments on 'A Drunken Dance'

Haha yeah right

Before I ever dated her again... She is history

I can't think of a better way for them to be able to share the joys of a nice STD then having the slut fuck anything with a dick while the pussy watches.

Nothing better than a slutty girlfriend. Even innocent women enjoy playing the slut every so often. Marry her as soon as you can!

your story was well worth the read thanks for submitting it

She'd really be a good catch to marry & take home to Mum.

Then she'd want to fuck your dad,your brother, the mailman even the pizza delivery guy & also once a year take on all the refuse lorry team for their Christmas bonus.

Loser - get some self respect !

Six months later, they found out that they both contracted HIV...and lived happily ever after.lol

As first contribution my comment is Good. You have style. My expectation is that the upcoming will be even better. I suggest more dialogue.

Tks

gave it a 5 for effort and content!!

Fucking whore

I'd love to hear a follow up story.

me and my hubby often go to busy bars but go in separately,he likes to watch guys flirt with me and see how far i will go.

Once i went outside to this guys car where he shoved his cock deep and spunked inside me.

Now i cant stop thinking about it and want more guys to take and use me.

You want to chat with me jane.222@live.com

xxx

Loved this story, so incredibly sexy - I could almost have written this myself, if only... almost been there, my lady has almost got there, my best pal has almost too - almost but not quite... we live in hope...

This isn't a loving wife story. It's a slut girlfriend story.

I love to watch my wife in our local, she flirts with the young guys, one guy she pushed to far and he ended up fucking her on the pool table after hours and most of the punters had gone.

I love when my wife acts like a slut and gets well fucked by several guys then comes home and staggers in only to push her cum filled pussy in my face. Pussy tastes best when well fucked and full of cum. Guys who haven't tried it yet are truly missing out on the best cunt licking ever. I even licked her once with a cock in her cunt and it accidentally slid into my mouth while cumming. I love cock, cum, and pussy too.O

Well-written!!

tominupstateny@live.com

Sounds like somewhere I lived in New Zealand and I am pretty sure I know the name of the bus tour, the town and the bar. Hell I think I even know the alleyway ... no it wasn't me before anyone asks

...another english cuckold-worshipper! Anyway - I did learn something, though: As soon as I find the prefix (or suffix, for all it matters) "english" in a name I rush to get rid of any temptation of reading his story. "English" inevitably destroys a fine steak or a written story.

Good going :)

So sad he watches his girlfriend cheat and does nothing...but I can understand, if she will always be a girlfrien, an easy fuck to him. And when the time to marry arrives, he can choose a woman with morals and leaves the cheater for her to find a cully to marry her...

not at all

on a sex site on the fucking internet. I gave it a 5 to make sure your brain dead dumb ass vote is canceled out!!

Think of all those lovely diseases squirted up into her slaggy drunken hole.

Gonorrhea syphilis herpes aids - all can make her a blind diseased hag within months of this encounter & also as she will obviously shag anything with a pulse can you imagine the mayhem she could create with decent married men going home to their lovely childhood sweetheart wives & lovely young children. Nice story LOSER !

I hope you write more! great story, very hot

I guess that's because it didn't make any difference. First of all, wrong category. No wives in this mess. And the reason it didn't make any difference is because she's only the GIRLFRIEND! So dumping the cheating slut costs him nothing. Just wave bye bye on your way out honey and don't let the door hit your ass on the way out. With unlikeable characters and terrible dialogue there was simply nothing to like about this sorry tale.

love it when my slut wife gets fucked then comes home drunk and has me lick her clean, now she wants to watch me suck several cocks, I cant wait O

your going to watch this sexy lady dance one day with a older black man hes going to get into her knickers fuck her bareback the only difference will be he will cum back time and time again visiting her till her tight little vagina is no more and your girlfreind is black pregnant with a swollen belly

I delight to think of the empty meaningless life you'll have, devoid of any love for anything other than yourself.

Too bad, no new stories in years. You show great skill and your talented eye for erotica is perfect for the genre! Thank you!

Because this is something my wife and I do since our kids grew up and moved away from home. We have a friend who we asked to stop by and she took him by the hand and led him to our bedroom, closing and locking the door behind. After about 30 minutes she called me in and asked me to lick her cunt. It was awkward, with our friend sitting there in her makeup chair, fully clothed.

I stuck my tongue on her and found it completely full. They both saw how much I enjoyed cleaning her out and when I looked around, I notice his cock was out, standing as hard as a rock and straight up as a flagpole. I walked over, reached down and started jacking his cock, wondering if he'd be uncomfortable with it. Nope! He sure wasn't and I continued until his hips were pumping hard. I looked over and saw my wife still laying on the bed, on her side watching with her fingers in a blur over her clit. It was obvious he was about to cum and I shocked all three of us.

When he was a millisecond from shooting all that yummy sperm out, I dipped my head down and wrapped my warm and wet mouth around the head of his cock and continued to jack. He didn't have a chance and started shooting into my mouth. I stayed with him as he filled my mouth and slowly worked him down after getting 8 shots into my mouth and on my tastebuds. Delicious! Afterward, I was able to get him up and had the honor of guiding his cock into my wife's leaking cunt and watching him fill it again. And I was invited to clean it out.

Now, some 5 years later, our friend either stops by or we call him. He comes over and if my wife isn't there, I suck him to completion two or three times while I jack myself. I've found nothing more exciting in my life than having the opportunity to jack and cum while my mouth is full of cock. The orgasms are world altering. And if he starts to cum when I am cumming, words can't explain the feeling.

Really, I don't remember the last time I fucked my wife, our friend has taken up the slack. I have severe ED and this way my wife is able to get her need of hard cock filled, I get to clean her pussy out, something I really enjoy. Plus I enjoy putting his cock to her pussy, rub it up and down her slot to wet it, then let him go to work! Cleaning his cock is something I enjoy also, though I would rather have had it shoot into my mouth.

My wife and our friend understand the terrible time I have in orgasming with a soft cock and help me out as much as I need. My wife will stand behind me and run a small dildo in and out of my ass while I jack my cock. While we do that, even if our friend is soft, he allows me to suck on it while I do my best to earn his load to swallow and that alone lets me orgasm from my soft penis.

My wife did something similar but when she came home she walked up to me laying in bed and put her pussy up to my face so I licked er pussy. We both got turned on as I sucked cum from her pussy and she said she would be doing this alot more. I cant wait.

The odds of this could staying together "Till Death Do Us Part" is one in a million.

I DANCE MANY TIMES IN CLUB AND IN MY ROOM WHEN PARTY IS GOING ON

MY LOVER WANT ME TO SEE IN NUDE DANCE I DO IT THEY FUCK ME IN DANCING MODE IF U WANT TO HEAR MORE PLESAE E MAIL ME

dolla_tata1@rediffmail.com

by mrs kundan g parakh

Last week Saturday, I met my gorgeous girlfriend for lunch at a local outdoor restaurant. I felt jealous and akwardly possesive when I first saw her because she wore a summer-dress which was higher than her knees. We ordered our meals, and I saw a local taxi parked next to our table with two black teenage boys staring at my girlfriend in the direction under the table where she sat. I made sure her legs were crossed. We walked to look at a painting gallery next to the restaurant. I saw the black boys stare at my girlfriends legs and lick their lips. One said, "Her legs are so thick and wide apart, I want to pull her panty down and suck her puss". I watched as we returned to our table. I walked a distance behind my girlfriend. I noticed one of the boys flash his penis at my girlfriend, and my girlfriend intentionally look. When we sat at our table, I saw that boy masturbate while purposely exposing his penis to my girlfriend. I ejaculated, because I noticed my girlfriend spread her legs and flash her panty at the boy. I left her behind after we argued. I returned 20 minutes later and ejaculated again non-stop when I discovered she was inside the taxi, and that same boy was fucking her puss without a condom, and the other boy was fucking her arsehole without a condom. I saw them ejaculate inside her puss and arsehole. It disgusted me, but I ejaculated again after seeing the boys sperm drip from her puss.

Had me so aroused. A great story

I would of had her suck my cock while he fucked her then took turns fucking her. That story was hott

If she was my girl friend I would have yelled down the alley to them (before she had her orgasm) "don't come back to the room tonight slut!" Then both of their nights would have been ruined, not just his.

Good thing he found out she is a slut before he married her. Well written, although, I would have liked for him to take some kind of stand, not just act like it never happened. Maybe you can recover his manhood by writing a part two and giving him some balls!

Though I'm not an author just my opinion.

How was he supposed to "find a new girlfriend"? After all, don´t women usually prefer men? No man would behave that way. Well, as they say: Show me the story and I´ll tell you about the author...

What a great story. You had me hard and stroking myself until I shot cum everywhere.

More stories please.

Mke

To find a new girlfriend because this one is a total slut. The good news? You aren't married so it costs you nothing to kick her to the curb!

In the absence of judgment thus story was on the extreme of hit and erotic. The girl was quite hot questioning her boyfriend for approval knowingly receiving his unspoken consent she acted out on her lust. Her boyfriend yearned to be a cuckold and that he got. If this were not his wish or fantasy the judgment of this situation rears its head. Having flirty fun can be an enjoyable aphrodisiac that more daring couples might engage themselves. There are anomalies that warrant examination if that is an issue for the reader. The fact that the boyfriend allowed this stud to grind very closely at his girlfriend was the moment I felt this story descending toward a cuckold arrangement. A traditional boyfriend would've gently protested at first with the touching beginning on the very first wave of touching by the stud on the dance floor. The story would've concluded. If the stud persisted them approach in the protestations would've escalated in-kind. This was the tipping point to this story. Whether the author had the intent or not, this was the behavior of a cuckold and hot girlfriend relationship which may have branched out to swinging by the feel of the story. If for some crazy reason this boyfriend didn't want this stud to have his way with his girlfriend then it is completely illogical. I don't have the author's privileges in moldings the characters and events so I can't change the story but I do possess my feelings and my culture and my comfort zones on the nature of my own relations. With that in mind I have frustration about the lines crossed by the couple and my reaction to them. Not my cup of tea, but very erotic.

Enjoyable read, not totally unrealistic & nice length. Good Job

Really loved the reality of it. His slutty girlfriend and the scenario was spot on. Great story!!

Fantasize about a hot young stud picking up my wife and fucking her all the time. I think you captured the feelings of angst and arousal well. Thanks!

i wouldnt sleep with her again but well written.

I would have packed up and left if she fucked someone that easy from drinking you wouldnt want to be married to her and expect her to be faithful cause it wouldnt happen.

Divorce i wouldnt sleep or be in same room for the slut drinking is no excuse for cheating Absolutely none

Hot story! Nicely written and full of passion.

thus losing quite a bit. The end should have been extended with something as a "showdown" perhaps? (Please don´t end it as a sanctuary for wimps)..

Nevertheless: Well written

Well written and maintained the intensity, the heat. Love girlfriends that lose control

left the possibility of a Chapter Two. Upon reflection this is a sad story with her future of bareback strangers and drunkenness and his future of watching her degrading both herself and him. We readers just got to see the opening scenes of their trip to the gutter.

Really liked this. Your lady sounds fun

More stories like this please. Sooner or later this slut must get pregnant with a child that is not her husband's. Excellent.

Those who can do and those who can't, watch.

This story made me hard immediately. Great details about watching his loving woman acting like a slut. Very believable because she didn't jump straight into it, the stranger came on to her. I don't think it's gay - this story is more about watching his nice girlfriend sharing her pussy. I think she was encouraged by her man because he didn't stop the stranger when they were dancing. He wanted to see her experience another man and she was curious. It doesn't make him a cuckold - as someone else pointed out the strangers cock was no bigger and he wasn't obsessed with being humiliated like most cucks. I think it's more about voyeurism and eroticism. The unprotect sex made it even hotter Thanks!

well written. hope to read more

very very hot. great pacing and just the right amount of detail. can't wait for another chapter

loved the story keep up the good work

This is hot...very graphic, very clear and very exciting. As to those who purport to hate guys who share their women...find another category. If you really dislike it, don't read it. Being a voyeur and sharing his girl does not make him gay. Insulting a writer doesn't make you masculine.

This story is very, very hot. Hope to have more from this writer. I have given it the very uncommon 5 stars... Great!

Wish this would happen to my girlfriend. Very strong first effort. Hope to see more from you in the future. Ignore the negativity. You have talent.