by blondeallover_00
could have been a great story, but the dialogue was horrendous
I've read both chapters and find your story hot and steamy. I hope Chapter 3 is in the works
I don't like the dialogue. Its very cheesy & stupid. I also don't like that Tristan is gay but has sex with Teri & they loaned him to the maid of honor. Why would a gay guy have sex with two girls just to have one guy. I don't see the logic in it.