by reberto69
If you want to be credibly critical grow a pair and use a listed account put your money where you mouth is. Some of us are not gifted in grammar and spelling but can tell a story. Can you? Publish or shut up. An anon complaint should carry all of the weight of the paper it is printed on!
Do you ever like exclamation marks!?!?
Especially when you run your moth over the material!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I'm sure that helps you choose a tense and stay with it!!!!!! Not to mention other shitty spellings!!
Please!!! Do us all a favor and flush any other stories you've written!!! And don't write anything else!!!!! You suck!!!!!
'A Erotic Dream...- I woke up form an erotic dream and had to share. '
Make up your mind.
Does "a" come before a vowel or does "an"?