All Comments on 'A Fall of Night'

Thank you, I enjoyed your story. The people seem real, even if they are dragons. The story drew me in, and now I have to wait and hope that it will continue soon.

A brilliantly told fairy-tale romance with a twist! It sounds like there could be some fabulous adventures waiting for Dorien & Nick on the other side of the portal.

Would love some additional chapters. Great story! Why was his "seed" required? I know that there is a reason but I'm not sure I understand. Please write additional chapter and expand the story. Thanks again for a great read!

Great story! Loved the storyline and pacing. But I feel as if I'm left hanging. There has to be more to this. Please??

I, too, feel that you should continue with this one as it doesn't seem to have a conclusion, leaving it open for further adventures. I've been a huge fan of dragons since I ventured on Pern with Anne McCaffrey.

Great story, but I want to know more! I was surprised that he was a dragon and wanted more descriptions. Great story!

This story begs so much for a follow up, and I hope to see it soon. It was hot where it needed to be, but still managed to hook me into the story. Not easy to do both, and few pull it off. Good work.

Wow. A wonderful story and was hot as well. Some things were left unexplained but that's where more chapters or a second story would be good. Consider it? That dragon thing at the end was too interesting to not write about. :P

What a wonderful beginning, I hope you are planning on future installments!

this is not the end. Just read the whole story and I loved it. The only weak moment was when Dorian left Anna in the tunnel and kept running. Doesn't seem like what her character would do. It was sensible but cold and she seemed like a warm, caring person, not entirely ruled by logic.

This does not seem like an ending, so I'm hoping it's not. I want to see their relationship develop. I want to know what happens in their new land and if Nick escapes his father's control. We need another scene with just the two of them...where was the makeup sex? And I need to know more about this place; how it was ruined and why they were on earth in the first place.

So again, please tell me this is not the end!

I see I am not the only one.

Excellent!

wow very good story. ty so much for sharing!!

That was absolutely beautiful, and yes it was too short. So when is chapter two going to be published? lol