All Comments on 'A Familiar Master'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hopefully it's boss treats it the same way

Maybe put's it's sick mind our of it's misary

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I often wonder if reading stories of male physical

superiority makes either writer or reader think that makes him a man?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
obviously written

by a man who has no idea how the mind of a female submissive works. rape is a fantasy that many indulge in and its just that - FANTASY. try having something stuck up your arse involuntarily and tell me it made ur dick hard. *shakes head* idiot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Has a good start

Has potential, but the grammar and spelling ruin the read. I'm by no means an expert, but if you had someone look this over it would be really good. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I felt very pleased that it was him……because I could give the police all the details of the piece of shit rapist.

You don’t ram anything anywhere when it’s dry, You don’t inject any drugs into anyone unless you’re a medical professional performing a sanctioned procedure. Rape Fantasy is not the same as Fantasy story about a rape.

Tess (uk)

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