All Comments on 'A Family Affair'

The thing is I know this is fiction but I need a reason why. There had to be some kind of build up to that. That would have increased your rating quite a bit. While what you wrote was hot, it did leave me wondering during the entire story "how did this become to be?"

Since this is (presumably) a fantasy, I don't need to know the background or have a build-up. So the son comes in and takes his mother, and she likes it enough to wonder if it will happen again. That's enough of a story, I can use my own imagination to come up with why it happened. The only thing I did not understand is why the story started in past tense and then changed to present tense.

I loved it, was hot enough for me. So many movies start this way, then tell how you got there, then build for that huge climax at the end. Good job keep it up.

I loved it, was hot enough for me. So many movies start this way, then tell how you got there, then build for that huge climax at the end. Good job keep it up.

This story is a good sex scene, and would be even greater if we knew who the people that were fucking. How did they get to the point of having an affair. Since it is mother and son I can only guess that there must have been some instance that caused them of for go all of the rules of society. It's a warm and sweet scene though, anytime I can read of a mother and son fucking is good for me. Thanks for the short but good scene.......Rich

Fantasy or not, that was a GOOD SHORT read. Thank you!

The characters were defined, mother was working in the house, son was working in the yard. Son got hot and horny went inside and fucked mom. Because they were so familiar with each its apparent that this was not their first encounter. Mom even reveals the real she signed the tongue piercing consent form. I'd be willing to bet it was her idea for the son to get his tongue pierced, the little freak. This story reminded me of myself in a similar scene, difference was it was my wife and me. Wish it had been my mom, one of my sisters or shoot one of her sisters. That was a good SHORT read. Thank you!

WELL DONE-YOU DID ALL YOU NEEDED TO DO -YOU LET MY IMAGINATION DO THE REST-GREAT JOB -STAY WITH IT-I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE -THANKS

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