All Comments on 'A Family Trailer Park Gangbang!'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
loved it

A little over the top but what the hell that's what erotic writing is all about.

Thanks

WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOvertureover 13 years ago
Well... as Billy Crystal would say, "He was only mostly dead, but not all dead..."

... which means you only got to scan this without getting a good stiffy. Since this story is pretty much over the top, I thought I'd throw into the fire a little of my own brand of cayenne. Is this story Hot. Hell no! It's a FLAME-THROWER!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Can't Believe It..

So ...no one smokes? What trailer family has no one that smokes or get's high? Also, a white woman named "Wanda?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I liked it

I liked it as well.. kinda unbelievable in spots....and to the other poster that said unbelievable about a white woman named Wanda....my sister is white and her name is Wanda. So that's believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good thanks Ahab. Wanda..

I have a second cousin I call Aunt Wanda. Yeah, she's white. She's also 64 or 65 yrs. old and if I got the chance the go-ahead from her I would make love to her. Tenderly but passionately screwing her. Sucking on her big long toes and tongue tickling her big soles, before moving up to kiss on her pussy. I'm in my mid 30s and just thinking about my Aunt Wanda has made me ache since I was 15.

chytownchytownover 13 years ago
This is one nasty story!!!!!!!

Damn it's good!!!!!!!! "Thank You"

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago

great job I enjoyed this and I like where it ended bravo

and yes my wife has a sister wanda and she is white living in a trailer on a farm in fact lol

max052max052about 13 years ago
LOVED IT!!

This one had pretty much everything. I've got three naughty buttons; incest, voyeur/exhibitionist and group, and this one had them all. Five stars, favorite author, favorite stories. Thanks for a great read. Please continue to feed our lust.

max52

joep01joep01about 12 years ago
I didn't remember this one...

But I was glad I could help you find some of the old ones Ahab...as I have said before, please keep up the great writing.

Joe

Paulo324Paulo324over 11 years ago
Simply amazing!

This story is so hot! I really wish you would continue the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just mindless perversion.

As usual for this writer. "1" !

Dark_DestinyDark_Destinyover 11 years ago
down south

i can hear "Dueling Banjos" in the background. but it's muffled by all the moaning and groaning. another excellent piece of work... in it's own twisted, red-neck way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Typical Brits vile perversion !

This degenerate nation should be wiped from the face of the earth. "1*" !

AhabscribeAhabscribeover 11 years agoAuthor
Clarification...

For the record, I am American...perverted, perhaps, but proudly American!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Not generally what I look for, but great

I found this silly story pretty damn good, despite the insane orgy. You have a wonderfully sick mind. It's great stuff.

Thanks!

beguiled999beguiled999almost 11 years ago
Sick and Nasty....

...just the way I like them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nothing like a good gang bang

especially amongst family members....loved it all those cocks up one pussy each week and all that cum being lapped up.....should have got a few of the women pregnant to add to the clan - vice is nice but incest is best...

FistoFistoover 9 years ago

This is.... Too good

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Who would think this type of story would be such a turn on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful

Yes, it is amazing. But I don't think it is amazing that he chose his mother over his sister or Aunt Rosie to have fantasies about or settle down with. Mother is the most influential woman in a man's life. From conception to adulthood, she is always there. On his side, rooting for him to win, kissing his booboo's when he falls, drying his tears when he cries. I won't say it is inevitable that they fall in love, but many young men do, and almost always the women for the rest of his life are measured against her standard. Told my mother when I was in first grade that I was going to grow up and marry her. Didn't even know what my "thingy" was for then, aside from peepee-ing. Well, I done grown up and we've been lovers these last 23yrs. Mother-Loving is the best. I go back to this story time and again. Its interesting to read comments, and I like to make comments, whether I like a story or not. This is good, well written, and like your other stories it shows that you are literate also. Thanks very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
the commits are better than the story.

It a shame that the commit are better than the story.

sassysasha89sassysasha89about 7 years ago

One of my faves. I wonder how many babies were made that summer.

Gunter99Gunter99about 7 years ago
Greatest story ever!

What a fabulous story - deserving of much higher ratings - 5 starts all the way from me

tribelover330tribelover330over 5 years ago
Fantastic

Story. Well written. Made me remember my times involved in a gangbang. Having a sloppy pussy around your dick is a feeling like no other. And I'm not ashamed to say, I licked her out after 2 guys nutted in her. I was the only one to make her squirt.

Thanks and keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good Story

Thanks for writing and sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Remember there was my mom and aunt went to Cuba for vacation to nudist resort once we got there you had to remove your clothes and once both woman removed theirs both were large double d size 48 extra large dark brown nipples very thick cunt hair.walked up to both of them gave little tug on cunt hair.once we checked in both mom and aunt signed contract then given copy once we reach room with only king size bed.told them well looks I am sleeping in the middle.then my aunt read what she signed yelled out wtf gives the guy the right to fuck any woman no condoms or birth control either paper gives right for guy cum in any woman if she gets knocked up guy not responsible for it she looked mom and me grabbed her put her on her back rammed her good and hard pumped her full of cum pulled out grabbed my mom did same to her after I was done both screamed at me yelled that both were not fixed week goes by both told way to go both of are pregnant now.they both got gangbanged by alot of guys at resort once back in our room they take shower then get in bed we talked my aunt said when your uncle finds out I cheated on him from forced sex with every guy my marriage is over told her it was over when came on vacation with us.told her your moving in with us we have king size bed where us 3 will be sleeping then said you and mom will be giving g me each me kids.pushed my aunt on her back shoved my cock in her cunt she screamed I am sore and I said just take it like my slut and shot my cum in her.then said to both of them we are still here for one more week so no showers aloud let cum dry on you let guys fuck you I even found couple of married and single woman in morning fucked them bareback before heading for airport they found me said that knocked them up too their boy friends and husbands were pissed then said you should not taken them to resort and I left

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Like what I read aunt and his mother got knocked up.i went to same resort with my mom she signed same piece of paper once got to out room put everything in room got naked started walking around we heard one woman screaming there was two black guys with large cocks up in womans cunt yelled don't cum in me I don't want black baby they started fucking her hard then third large cock shoved up her ass they worked her over good then guy in her ass pulled out shove his cock up her cunt she screamed real loud I yelled give black kid they smiled cum in her cunt sometime she yelled no once they came in her then pulled out she felt leak out of her just laying there then black guys saw my mom said fresh meat they came up to us said you know we have the right to fuck her said yes but not till I am done with her so they picked her up put her on lounge held her legs open said fuck her now she won't be back for two nights when she came back looked at her she was well used by group of black guys I asked her how many said thirty guys told her band over her cunt and ass well used and stretched.she said need take shower said I am the entertainer for night let every guy fuck me once left room she walked to center of the room every guy drilled her real good guys said well that one good used up southern every guy said hope we knocked you upturned said your to late my son got to me first

Harvey8910Harvey8910over 2 years ago

I did not like the story and gave it 2 stars.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGalealmost 2 years ago

Crazy but a fun read.............():\

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good story I am glad to hear that mom and son stayed together and not sleep around with other men in the family, the sister and aunt is normal to join them

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a21 days ago

This is the first gangbang(willing or otherwise) story I have ever read. I cannot believe that with so many in attendance/participants that some hint of jealousy did not appear. There cannot be so many mentally, emotionally and psychologically mature individuals in a family.

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