All Comments on 'A Family's Story Ch. 02'

She was wanting her son to love her and to give her sexual satisfaction, but her son for some reason treats her like a slut.

I would hope that he keeps her safe, and shows her some love.

Thanks for the read.

You had a fantastic story going and you are ruining it by making his mom a whore.

Back off that line and only make it a fantasy.

why whore mom out.keep her forself and enjoy.

well written and hot.......part 3 soon please...enjoying your story

I knew after reading chapter 1 that the next chapter would also stupid . I was right . Another 1 from me .

I love the dominant son but he should have had to work harder to get the mom.

Still a good mom/son tale.

If only more mothers were as hot and horny. Great story, keep her hot and willing.

I don't mind that he's whoring the Mom out. Whores get treated like one in & out of the bedroom. Women get treated like women out of the bedroom but if they handle their business whores in the bedroom. The Mom was pathetic with her old ass ”do you think I'm hot” or ”is she tighter than me” lols fucking loser. I'm looking forward to him whoring his slut of a Mom. I want the daughter to join in on it they can make her submit together. Especially since she's so jealous of her daughter its sad your an adult just cause she acts childish doesn't mean you need too also.

I hope this second note written in support of your family series moves your writing stature up a notch. Just completed this second chapter, and oyu are getting better. Usually I enjoy more build up and sexy seduction as written in a series titlrd The Rambler. All that slow discovery in a dark car while a buddy moves quickly in the back seat with his horny mom. Your work here is every bit as good. I'll be reading the mom is hooker chapter next. Hope the telling was a clean as this 5 star piece of fantasy.

What delightful story telling. Your passion and intrigue permeate your narrative. KEEP IT UP, you're doin' fine.

Really excellent series, right up there with the best. The amazing thing is that this is from a 'new' author! very well written and very hot'n'horny! Let's have some more of this please!

Easy 5*

It would be so great to control one's Mother; but not to whore her out. Just to use her for your pleasure, and maybe loan her to a couple friends.

Great stories and hope there are more to come! Well done.

@bambi_doe get a life loser. Youre commenting everywhere seething with hate.

And this story sux again. I was just hoping to see some hot action between Jer and Amber. Instead we get this sh1t