by HotMilf38
Very vivid, extremely erotic and very fun to read. Looking forward to the next story!
Best story I"ve read so far. fantastic build up. Needs to be in the HALL OF FAME!!
OMG! I would love to be James! I want to do the same things to my real Mother! Only problem is She is such a Cock Teaser!
This is a terrific story of hot motherfucking! HotMilf38, please, please! ignore the comments titled "Pedestrian," themselves totally pedestrian. You've given us a great tale of a mother lusting after what her 18 year old boy's got swinging between his legs. As a mature lady this mom knows her son's got a big stiff prick and a pair of hot young balls that need servicing real bad. Mom understands that her James is excited by his own mother's cunt, just like all sons are. Today more and more mothers are realizing that between their legs they have what their boy wants most of all--his own birth canal, his own mother's twat! Shoving his young dick up where he came out of and blowing his young balls up his mommy's twat is a dream come true. Why would a caring loving mother deny her cunt to her boy? He's got the really hard cock and youthful stamina to give mom the best fucks she's ever gotten. Mothers need their boy's stiff prick as much as sons need their mother's wet twat. It's just natural!
YOU'D BETTER HAVE MORE CUMMING,waiting for more......
You have me wanting to be your son and or your husband.. wow.. you have great talent writing.. I have never thought much of insest one way or the other , but this got me wanting it badly.. I have never read a story that got me more aroused, more covered in precum and more anxious to stroke to a massive orgasm... this gave me an explosive orgasm shooting cum up my chest... what a great writer you are and such an erotic story.. Im anxious for more from ya..
I loved your story. It had me excited all the way through. I hope you have more to come...
You really must write more stories like this. the description of the mom is brilliant. have a look at my stories and let me know if you want to work together on a story...
That's so horny - not normally my thing but thanks for the fantasy! It certainly pushed me too far; twice... ;-)
This story built-up very well indeed. You didn't throw us straight in to the "money shot" and increased the sexual tension and arousal all the way through. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Great read, hope you can update us on what happened next with James or maybe your other son!
Wow! I LOVED this story!!!
I had an affair with an older neighbour when I was in my early twenties (she was 48 at the time) and she loved us playing out the mother/son role. The woman in this story reminds me of her; gorgeous, sexually confident, kinky and still probably the best fuck of my life!
Can't wait to hear more of your stories!
Good read and really interesting being your first one. Please keep writing.
Loved the story - would like to hear more adventures.
Fave bit is the lead up to the fuck scene in the basement - blown my load reading it!!!!
FOR A FIRST STORY, YOU GOT A WINNER. PLEASE DON'T LET US HANG, CHAPTER 2 ASAP. YOU LEFT A LOT OPEN, THE OTHER SON, THE FATHER, AND WHATS NEXT FOR JAMES, A FAN FOREVER. MORE MORE MORE
Good idea for a story but you spend so much time with dialog and too little describing what we are suppose to be seeing. I can see the potential and read and read but after a while forget it.
Don't believe what you read from anonymous commenters, They don't have the guts to write a story and it doesn't take any guts to write something negative!
A good mix of dialogue and exposition can make a good story a great story.
Good job!
SCHUPPINZIGH
loved this hot incest story with great sex nicely written thanks
I thoroughly enjoyed this story; however, his mother knows how psychologically and emotionally her son was attached and wantedx her. The ending probably made the son think he was nothing more than a sex toy for his mother. He trust her unconditionally. She has the opportunity to make her son into an excellent lover. One who know how important it is to sexually satisfy the female before himself. I would have loved to read a chapter 2 but since it has been over 10 years since this story was "published", it will never happen.