by mrjones502003
I LOVE IT. IT'S SO DRAMTICLY ,SENSITIVE AND EXQUISITE THE START WAS FANTASTIC AND THEEND UNBELIEVABLE UNIQUE . IT'S FULL OF PASSION AND COMPASSION AND RICH OF FATHERHOOD'S LOVE . YES FATHERS MUST TO SACRIFIED THIER LIFES FOR THIER KIDS . WE ALWAYS WANT TO BE WITH OUR KIDS TO HELP , SUPPORT AND PROTECT THEM EVEN FROM US AND (((ALL THESE WHAT MACK DID TO HIS ONLY DAUGHTER)) IT'S SO SO DIFFICULT TO LEAVE UR CHILDREN "" BUT WHEN IT'S FORGOOD AND MAKE THEM HAPPY I'LL DO IT"" REA I LOVE THE END OS " I DON'T HAVE A DAUGHTER LOOKING FOR UR NEXT newstart
AS SOMEONE WHO HAD A PARENT WALK OUT OF MY LIFE WITH THE BULLSHIT EXCUSE THAT IT WAS FOR MY BEST INTERESTS I AM INCREDIBLY OFFENDED THAT ANYONE CAN BE SICK ENOUGH TO WRITE A STORY ALONG THE SAME LINES! TO WALK AWAY FROM HER WHEN SHE SAID WHAT SHE DID IS JUST EVIL! YOU SHOULD EITHER DELETE THIS OR TOTALLY REWRITE IT!