All Comments on 'A Father's Love Ch. 02'

....is better then the original.This is highly erotic writing expressly because it is more parts mental and emotional than physical,(which at the end seemed a bit rushed-but did not deter from the argument for much more here.)Still want to see some questions answered.Like what made him see survival techniques as attempts to "please"-How does he rationalize equating the reasoning behind human behavior with animal behavior, and I've forgotten if there was an explanation for her gullibility to the point of stupidity in part one.But this is almost as sick as some of my lighter fantasies so Kudos to you author!Not many come this close on this site.-pistolpackinpete

i dont normally take the time to comment on stories, but WOW that was amazing!! i love how the dad can be mean and kind almost at the same time. and like i said in the title of my comment im almost ashamed to have liked the story. oh well, hot is hot, even from a freaky dad like the one in the story!

I truly enjoyed this story, and I love the way you have the father manipulate the daughter. It makes the story much more realistic. I hope to read more from you soon. Maybe with the father finally bedding Marshmallow.

She needs to be a total woman, a three hole woman. Stretch her asshole by fingering her, even if she complains, she needs to be stretched out. Stretch her until he can get three fingers in her asshole with lube with her having just a little pain. A good butt plug for her to use while she sleep at night would do what he wants. She needs to be ready when the time comes when he wants to fuck her in the ass. He needs to train her how to please him with her body. Instruct her that her body is his now, and no other person should be intimate with her.

Having Daddy use coercive force is so hot. I love the fact that she has to obey Daddy, no matter how afraid or horrified she is by what he is doing to her. After all, if it isn't forced and nasty, what good is getting raped by Daddy? My most very favorite fantasy is a forceful Daddy. Pistolpackingpete sounds like a very good Daddy.

Definitely a very Dominate daddy :)

Seems as if he is teaching his daughter very well how to be sub :)

You paint a great picture ;)

Words very detailed, kept me reading and looking forward to reading the next :)