All Comments on 'A Few Innocent Pictures'

Very well written. loved it

That was smoking hot.

I liked the way it started - the hot tub scene certainly grabbed my attention -and you worked backwards to beggining. I also liked that while one was clearly the aggresor, they were both inexperienced and just excited to be with each other. I would have liked it if more time was spent exploring their inner thoughts and feelings, and I don't think anyone here would complain if the action was longer. Maybe a sequel?

This story is hot as hell and very well written.

This was very hot Rachel. I hope to see more of your works here soon.

Incredibly passionate and beautifully written.

Erotic, beautiful tale omg i almost became so in volved that i was almost caught playing omg have to finish. kisses rachel

Wow! What an incredible story. We loved it. It reminds Kay of her first encounter with Kelly (see our story about that). Thank you and keep the stories coming. Kay and Steve

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