All Comments on 'A First Encounter'

... my first time would be like. Loved this story ... it was a bit short, but otherwise excellent.

for your comment. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. It's short because it's my first erotic story, and I wanted it be fresh on the page (I wrote it in less than an hour). If I'd worked more on it, I'd gain in detail and length but I would lose in authenticity as I'm not sure I'd have been able to resist embellishing. As it is, it's more or less what happened.

Well written and very relateable... thanks! x

This should have been more appropriately posted under GAY MALE.

I agree, which is why I've resubmitted to be put into that category... still, it is a first time experience, and there's nothing wrong with first time gay sex...

me very horny :)

sounds very real, i could have written it about my first encounter, and every first encounter since, very good.

I want to encourage you to continue in this vein of writing from experience. I think you story telling and attention to detail are excellently honed. Please keep at it. Your description on the ''draining of desire'' is an apt and insightful phrase. I'm going to be watching for your work in the future. Thanks for sharing.

I also want to encourage you to ignore the thoughtless criticism of angry snipers.

DOUG out

I liked, and snickered at that line. "He puts his thumb in front of my lips." The paragraph that follows is a masterpiece of mental rampage - most of us will admit that in times like these, the mind doesn't have any punctuation, no pauses, no rational continuity - just total randomly flashed images.

That's about the most perfect, and most subtle action to test the readiness of a beginner. Specially a beginning when both players appear to be off to less than favorable opening night - he overslept and his visitor was so unsure he was ready. You put together a charming introduction for a positive future. There was no humiliation for either partner. Kudos and stars. Tony Clarke

I can't help but identify with the story as it is similar to events I have experienced. Can't wait to read more!

Possibly the best gay first encounter story I've ever read. I hope my first time is like this.

Contact me at....guess I'm too shy but I sure would love Ur cock in my mouth; give you pleasure too and some cum...

That was a fantastic read....my first time wasn't as tender as that...it was in a public park toilet and very rushed ( but also very exciting )

Like you I didn't get fucked, but I knew part of me wanted it....we did quite a lpt of touching each other - but ultimately all he wanted was for me to suck him off( which I did ).... I wasn't sure about him cumming in my mouth, but events moved so fast ( plus he gripped my head so tight ) , that I was rewarded with a huge thick load which I had to swallow!!.....I came in my shorts too....then he just zipped up and before leaving told me he would be back the next day at the same time...and of course I was there

Got hard reading this good