All Comments on 'A First For Us Both Ch. 3'

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BfreetorunBfreetorunover 9 years ago
I knew they would get pregnant. If you fuck without precautions you always get that way.

I was hoping that they would wise up before she got pregnant. It means nothing but trouble, regardless.

PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 3 years ago
4 stars

I’m enjoying the story and the love but the amount or errors is slightly annoying, it’s not to bad on its own but also the pace of the story is very rushed I feel. I may just be more critical of story pacing then others since I’m writing my own full length novel so that could be it.

SynjarMcabeSynjarMcabeover 1 year ago

I like the soft passion in your stories

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