All Comments on 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love Ch. 04'

i have been reading this site for years and this is the first series that i actually look forward to reading the new stories to. please keep up the writing, even if no one else comments on it let me say thank you for writing such a heart felt story.

Poor Cal!

Nice Story.

I can't believe, after all he's already been put through, that she would tease him again, on this of all nights!

Also, since they know who his father was, why couldn't they at least have gotten some child support?

I realize they couldn't force him to marry Cal's mother, or even be involved in Cal's life, but especially since, if I remember correctly that he came from a well-to-do family, Cal's mother shouldn't have had to struggle THAT hard.

you put God into your story....how often does THAT happen...excellent!

I'm sorry. God is supposed to be all-powerful, created the world, the whole Universe and gave us life, but can't prevent bad things from happening?

That's bullshit! Either he can, and CHOOSES not too, so FUCK him, or he can't, so he really isn't what he is claimed to be, so who cares about him, or he simply doesn't exist.

I choose the third option.

Year's ago I, in my twenties had a socially awkward friend & Probably a virgin. Cal makes my Friend look like Don Juan, Casanova, and Wilt Chamberlin all rolled into one. Cal is so awkward that if I met him in real life i would suspect he was somewhere in the autism spectrum. Yet he is a genius in multiple disciplines? Oh and rich. Supposedly he is popular as is his buddy Warren. If Warren is such a pal, he could arranged to get Cal laid before these events.

Maureen is a jerk. She knows he is awkward and a virgin and basically mocks him by saying this loudly enough for others to hear in a restaurant. Yeah if that's love...count me out

The character development is just unbelievable everyone in this tale is socially crippled. I keep reading in desperate hope that they get better

This author harks to O'Henry or E A Poe who never used a nickel word if they could find a five dollar word in their thesaurus....emanate? artifact.(artEfact) and too many others to enumerate. Good story notwithstanding