A Forever Love Ch. 05

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"Get her out of here," Christian shouted toward Rafe, and he turned to face the furious face of the werewolf.

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I want to thank all of you for the wonderful feedback. Even the not so nice feedback hasn't been as bad as it could have been. I hope you continue to enjoy this story and please, remember to vote and leave a comment if you'd like, all are welcome.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

There's some of the backstory for Matthew I was looking for! I feel bad for him, now seeing more of what he's seen and gone through. I'm afraid Christian will kill him.... Is the only way Matthew can find peace is through death? :(

It is nice to see Christian's compassion come through, a bit of understanding of why Matthew feels the way he does. Good story, now I have to see it through to end, even if I cry buckets of tears. Sigh. - Theresa

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great Story

It's really a great story and I'm enjoying reading. Keep it coming.

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyabout 7 years ago

I really enjoy the way you weave a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I like how you develop the characters and have a good story line.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
Great chapter!

That's more like it. You created pity for Matthew. You showed Christian and Rafe's goodness...if Christian has to hurt Matthew it will be in self-defense. It is sad Matthew is so damaged. I liked the chapter alot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER

Sirens_CrySirens_Cryabout 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

Dont make us wait! I love this story. I agree though killing Mathew would suck and Kinlye wouldn't forgive Christian for it. Maybe after a knock down brawl Mathew might realize that Christian was not a monster like the other vamps he has known. Keep up the great writing!

missvixxen08missvixxen08about 14 years ago
5 stars

Great chapter! Now you have to resolve it without Christian killing Matthew. Maybe he could hit his head and come to his senses or something? Seriously, great story and beautiful characterizations. Can't wait for the next one.

MicKayMicKayabout 14 years ago
A great series

You have a gift with words that brings the reader into the scenery. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
good story

I am really enjoying this story... but, on the other hand, this seem oddly like Twilight... please introduce something that would counter the similarity with Twilight.. apart from that, as always, your writing is wonderful..

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