All Comments on 'A Formerly Shy Person Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lovely

The gentle progression of your characters through the stories is well done, but that also means that the story keeps extending through more episodes....which means that I have to wait another week or so for the fourth part. Can you possibly write faster? Well, I'm headed for the shower, and it's all your fault. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice!

I liked the first two chapters better.But its your story, you do what you want :)

gkrishnagkrishnaover 2 years ago

I was afraid she was going to get naked with the guy so quickly, that would have been disappointing for a story like this. Glad to see you're pacing things appropriately!

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