by KKross
Many are in same boat with just friends. Neither wants to make first move. An incident like this pushes things forward for both to benefit.
Not the usual genre I spend time in. But I wander through this one from time to time. Reminded me of a time long ago when I had a good female friend that I wished turned into more. So I got to live it vicariously through your story. Nice job.
Just wished that I had a special relationship with my first one like your Jeff and Tanni. Except that my first was very experienced and she was on a manhunt. I was just 14 at the time and felt flustered when she straddled me. I didn't tell her it was my first time but I suppose she could have guessed it as I didn't last very long. She left me with a feeling of being cheated of my virginity. Then she moved on with her manhunt. She didn't even return my calls. Oh, what am I talking about. For whatever reasons, I still like this story.
The story is touching and for me it was reminiscent of my youth and loving innocent relations I treasure. The fact that they may not have been in love but truly loved eachother is of special interest. The fact that the relationship never blossomed to a full blown romance was a disappointment but realistic in the real world. I appreciated the great description and emotion that the author put forth. The girl's thinking was never presented so we don't know the full story as fictional stories give authors license with facts. Perhaps, Jeff was accurate in reading Tanisha's romantic interest or lack there of but the story excludes that directly. The story was very well done and moving. Thank you.
NICE BUT IT SHOULD BE MORE REAL IF THEIR IS A COUPLE OF SHOCKING MOMENT MORE...