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AngelLady2264AngelLady2264over 7 years ago
Enjoyable

It was a pleasant fantasy. Grammatical errors bother me probably more than they should on this site.:P It was a little choppy but the story made sense. I'm sure most guys his age wish they could still get it up as often as Jay did!

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