All Comments on 'A Gentle Awakening'

Want more.

This is starting wonderfully! Please continue!

Your story is pretty good, but I'm left wondering, where was chapter 1? The is no build up and we know nothing about the characters or the situation which led to the story. Those items would help a great deal and make this a much better story, not too mention a better length.

You tease...

I need more!

much like my own first time at the hands of a mature and experienced woman!

It was great. Just wish there was a build up to when they met at the door. What led him to take such a bold step at the door? I want moreeeeeeeeeeeee!

i was titllated