All Comments on 'A Gentle Submission'

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Embracer_of_SoulsEmbracer_of_Soulsabout 18 years ago
Excellent

With each paragraph as your story unfolded. I could see myself bond and exposed, feeling every touch and sensation.

You did a wonderful job putting this into words for others to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I want to shout it to the world....

...that you wrote this specifically for me. I want everyone to know that it was crafted gradually based on my answers to your intriguing questions. This was an exercise in exploration and resulted in a realization that despite my independent nature I could enjoy being the woman in your story. You intelligently mixed in the ingredients of trust and affection so I could relate to a relationship such as this. Thank you for teaching and enlightening me. Smiling at you across the pond.

ZanapthrosZanapthrosabout 18 years ago
D/s or just Bondage

This does seem to Me to be more of a bondage tell then of a D/s relationship. there does not seem to be any real signs of Dominance expect for the restraining, that however does not alone make for D/s, over all a good story, but from what I was told it to be, a little off mark.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hello my friend

I was just chatting with you..and I've just now read the first story...erotic...so very hot..I loved it..I imagined myself...having things inserted into my holes...hearing voices..people feeling me...squeezing my breasts...pushing their fingers into my pussy...and into my bum hole....can hardly wait to chat again..marie

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
mmmm

i want this....v

Absinth3Absinth3about 8 years ago
10 years later

and it's still in-freakin-credibly HOT!! ... and now so am I...

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