All Comments on 'A Gift For My Father'

All of the above. I love this story so much.

Well written, very erotic, a little soft, it gave me inspiration and lots of hardons, a sequel, with much more sex is needed.

I want a sequel and i want it now

I remain a little uneasy with the incest theme - Jana stops just short of slipping Dusty's cock into her pussy - but it's inarguably a well-written tale.

This was a very well written story and the incest theme was hot!

The girl was a perfect tease and wasn't supposed to have sex right there on the spot. She's a virgin, and it was even mentioned that she had never given head, either.

But for a virgin who had supposedly never given head, she sure knew how to give a hell of a handjob. In my opinion, that was the only flaw of the story.

A sequel where she goes through the pain of losing her virginity on camera would be fun.

I would love to read about how this continues.

As a new member only just come across this story. Instant hard on. An almighty packet at the end. Shame there was no follow up.

I loved it! Sweetly sensual and hot. I loved the artistic plot and the great characters. Please write more chapters and other stories like this one!

It was a sexy story, but I would have kept the story line to Dad and daughter.