All Comments on 'A Gift for Simone'

You've excelled yourself GA. Five.

How this would end.

This has a better theme than most of your stories.

what a total waste of time. It was OBVIOUS that simone was NOT communicating with Jake. Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh....

it was NOT erotic at all.. unless mentally disturbed out of controls whores are your thing

Total rubbish! 1*

I enjoyed the story. Didn't guess Sweetie (Fat Cow) would be the e-mail MainMan, which made it a wonderful surprise. It IS hard to believe a competent Personal Asst. could wig-out so thoroughly.

... but I liked it.

Enjoyed it. It was clearly not Jake but i didn't guess the wife. Nice portrayal of the way obsessions grow in people's minds until they become totally irrational.

It is a very good Modern Figaro Type Revenge story.

A pleasant read. ...

When is somebody going to write something worth reading?

The twist @ the end was good and actually I was hoping. Jake to fess up to wife. Well done 4 stars

I think you telegraphed fairly early that it would be a setup. The only characters introduced that it could be was Allison or the Fat Cow. I just set that aside and enjoyed the story unfolding. I actually laughed out loud a couple of times while Simone was on her emotional roller coaster.

5*

Don't know if it would apply in the U.K. but, with all the emails Simone would have the proof of entrapment & being seduced / coerced into doing things. So, Mrs. Morris having Simone fired could backfire in litigation.

I knew something was up, but was surprised it was Mrs. Morris. Good story, a fiver, as usual. ~M xo

A well written thrill ride...

It was a slow drawn out story, with a not to surprising ending. I figured from the start that it was not him sending the emails so it had to be the wife. There were to many of her fantasy fucks throughout the story, they just added length to the story. I gave it a rating of 2 stars.

It was obvious it wasn't Jake. But, the wife was a complete surprise.

I would have bet money that it was a janitor or IT man.

The far better erotic story is if the wife blackmailed Simone for sex.

The masturbation scenes were pretty good, but hell, Simone, the wife, and hell throw in James too, that would have made a hot story.

Too long and involved and predictable. I jumped to the end from the middle of page two. The wife was a good touch. Would have liked more description of her: the competition. And I like your writing very much most of the time, but this was not the good stuff.

First of your stories I've read. Not the USUAL cheating wife story I'm used too in the LW category but delightful nonetheless.

Five *'s for the writing, five for the story with the twist at the end. I was expecting it to be Alison; I liked the surprise. You're very descriptive writing paints Simone as a very believable character.

Moving on to your next LW with anticipation.

That one was a surprise. Rather enjoyed it.

Well done.Creative. I preferred the revenge story, which captured perfectly cold rage. Far more interesting than the typically rather prissy BTB stories in LW.

Good story, too dragged out though, had to skim over the middle as it was just too slow for me

Quite the twist, I suspected something and was pleasantly surprised at the ending. Very well done, indeed. Thanks again for writing, your work makes it pleasurable for the rest of us 😁😜👍

You’d need to be pretty stupid not to figure out it was Jake’s wife early on. No twist for me, and I’m not prescient. It was easy to see where it was going, then it took too long to get there. 3 out of 5.

Nice story, you lead the direction well nicely put together

Gave it away in the first couple paragraphs.....

Best "loving wives " tale ever.