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Click hereJulie does the same we all have cum drooling out our mouths and we all laugh. We push each other into the pond to get the sweat and cum off us. We all got out wet.
The girls said, "We will wait to get dry."
Chapter 11
Josh said, "We will pedal ourselves dry."
"Nude," the girls said.
Josh said, "sure you girls look sexy flaunt it."
They looked at each other and said, "together what the fuck let's go."
Josh whispered to Julie, "I told you I was going to watch you pedal that cute ass of yours." Julie gives me a kiss and wiggles her ass just as they reached their bikes.
They looked great ahead of us with their tits bouncing and their asses moving as they pedaled, they kept looking back and laughing seeing our cocks swaying in the breeze. We reached the road and stopped decide to go to our house Josh reached for clothes the girls took off with our clothes and started riding away.
We biked a mile down the road nude. No cars came along but we were all glad to reach Josh and Julie's house. Once in the house Bill and Brenda started to get dressed while Julie and Josh stayed naked.
Brenda looked at Julie and Josh's big cock and says, "Fuck it" and removes her clothes.
Julie says, "Looks like lover boy is always last."
- COMMENTS
ReiDeBastosover 8 years agoI, for one, expect to read something written by someone who had enough respect for his/her readers to have the story edited, hopefully by someone with more than a passing familiarity with the English language.
ReiDeBastosover 8 years agoSorry, but between the problems with homonyms (sound-alike - using "to" instead of "too", "here" instead of "hear", and so on), the shifting point of view (who is narrating the story: Josh? Bill? someone else?), changes in tense (is this happening now, or has it already happened?), and characters thinking about themselves in the third person, this piece is so BADLY in need of an editor, I couldn't bring myself to finish reading it! Add to that the homoerotic elements in a story NOT filed under "Gay Male" (nor with at least a mention of that content in the introduction, so that those who would not enjoy (or are offended by) reading of man-on-man encounters would be forewarned), and I am giving up and moving on.
-Rei
Domdomainover 8 years agoPremise is good. Is it perfect? Nope, but who cares people, FFS. it's free!!. Take heart Mountain, it's a start and you're trying to expand your horizons. Don't put too much stock in what a bunch of anonymous pricks have to say. Smack talk is cheap when they don't put a name to it. You've got a good imagination, keep plugging away, it will get better if you fight to learn from your mistakes.
Anonymousover 9 years ago6'3" and 145? If he's 6'3", his skeleton alone weighs at least 100 pounds, even if he's skinny as fuck. At 145, you died of hunger 20 pounds ago.
Other than that, great story.
observer7over 9 years ago....because we all know straight men are all that matter in the Sci-Fi category....HA!
And you can't talk about fifth grader grammar. I just found this in your fake rape story:
"Please don't? Please, please please just fuck the hell out of me?" Jen had her head down almost like she was dejected.
What is with the question marks? Don't you know the difference between an exclamation point and a question mark? It sound ridiculous when the awesome Gary Stu is being the best lover EVER to multiple women without breaking a sweat. Or...I guess that is how all CA Valler girls talk, which makes it worse...ew.
Last thing: if you have EVER wanked off to anything in SciFi other than dick-in-pussy missionary, you are a hypocrite and sorry, boy on boy or girl on girl does not trump a SciFi theme. You can go give a bison bull a rimjob and love it, since you're so scared if the D.
