All Comments on 'A Gift from an Alien or What Pt. 02'

Again, your premise is sound, but seriously consider finding an editor to help clean up the numerous grammatical errors.

I am looking for an editor the two I contacted had no reply the third alex3010 I have not heard back yet. I have part 3 and 4 in the pending stage so the same mistakes will be there also I am trying but it is my first story thank you for your comments I have taking them with due diligence.

It's like your brain is skipping ahead of your fingers; so that you only write down part of the sentence.

Your spelling & grammar/punctuation is atrocious. You place whole sentences in quotes, when only the words spoken by the characters require quotes.

You also switch between First person and third person, often in the middle of a sentence/paragraph. There are more, It just sets my teeth on edge to list them...

I hate to nitpick, but the grammar and flow/wording are TERRIBLE. Makes this series very hard to follow. I strongly suggest better editors.