All Comments on 'A Gift From His Father Ch. 19'

More to come I hope... also you had 18A... where is B :D

I like it A LOT as always, please keep more chapters coming....

Thanks for your work!

yes keep those chapters coming

Another amazing chapter, what's going to happen with April. The bigger question that seems to be overlooked is what is John Dad planning

I'm amazed that I've made it this far. The horrible spelling, missing words, poor use of punctuation, and terrible sentence structure has finally taken its toll. Perhaps I was hoping the story itself would continue to generate more interest, but alas it has not.

Good luck to those willing to suffer reading further. But for me, I'm done.

this is the second time i have read this and it is just as great as the first time i read it evean with all the mestakes people do not realize this is just a site that you put your stuff up on that people do not have dedicated editors that do it for a living so there are bound to be mistakes loved the story keep writing

tried reading but hate it when you jump from story to story and dont finish -been that way the whole time i'm done with it

I tolerated the English as a second language errors, you are learning, and you story is most creative, ... but all the left leaning stuff is a big turn off, ... keep it to yourself please, ... And poor April, the Rachel Mad Cow look, yuck! I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy, ... which just might be Rachel herself, ... sigh, ... ;-) TTFN