All Comments on 'A Gift in Disguise Ch. 01'

Loved this first chapter, greatly look forward to many more.

to write hot and juicy story with potentially energy dissipating scientific conversation and information mixed into it. You have that talent. Your tale possessed great build-up, tension, sauciness and sexuality. It's an adult story that is oh-so-rare in the land of adult fiction. Thanks so much. I look forward with considerable anticipation to chapter two.

But it was kind of boring. I mean, on and on, and whatever, and whenever. I hate to complain about that, since you are an excellent writer, but geez!

wow...just awesome! can't wait to see ch2

Just love body hair in women especially excessively hairy pits. Cant wait for more

and so much more sexier than women who shave it all off just to look like a little girl - which is probably what many men like to think they are. A full hairy pussy is the most erotic sight and feeling out when you rub your face in it while sucking and licking her clit. And hairy pits are just yummy. Brilliant story yet again.

Great story. loved the character development. Lorraine is a HOTTIE!!!

I can see Tom ending up with his own harem of very satisfied.....and satisfying....older women.

I have read several hundred Literotica stories and that was the most erotic I have ever read.

a great story loved it

i like the way you write. this story seemed so drawn out. so slow. can we get there already?

Overall I liked the story.

There was 1 point I felt weirdly about, where he told of his first dates, and she knew without him saying anything that her name was Linda.

Not bad...

Wonderful story, well written

Just found this older story but so glad I did. You write very nicely. I loved how the pieces fit nicely and told a tale that felt believable. Also loved the slow build up as well as the detail during their first encounter. The ending was enjoyable and left me looking forward to future chapters.

Fantastic work. Thank you.