All Comments on 'A Girl in Need Ch. 02'

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Phxray54Phxray54over 13 years ago
A lawman with a heart

Thank you for your efforts, they are well worth the wait. I like the character development, not too much information in a short time but enough to move the plot forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
thanks

Thanks for writting this story, see I was sexually miss treated at age nine when my dad was in the military by a close family friend. Threats went along way then and I didnt have anyone to turn to, thankfully we moved with in the month and I never had to see him again or fo through anything like that agian. I found out after I was in my twenties that he had gone to jail for robbery and drugs, so at least someone got him off the streets. More needs to be done to help the abused but at least it is better than when I was young.

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Excellent writing

and an important choice of subject matter. It is interesting and moving. The future couple is composed of attractive people.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It gets complicated. How to balance delicacy with a criminal investigation. (SVU) Especially with a fundamentalist who believes he is self entitled and above the law.

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