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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I love the way this is going; it has the makings of a heart warming romance.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Thanks For The Read***

This would be nice in Romance if you take it that far. Still a good read here in Mature!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep going...

Cute little story so far. Enjoying the tease!

holliday1960holliday1960over 4 years ago
Hidden in plain sight...

a lovely jewel. I like these short glimpses of reality and I like that you chose to carry on the original entry in the 750 word challenge. I hope to read the entries in next year's challenge as it's produced some surprisingly wonderful stories this year. A Girl on the Bus is one of them.

JerseyGirlDownUnderJerseyGirlDownUnderover 4 years ago
I shall use you as a guide

I shall use you as a guide on how to flirt on public transport. I am envious that my route has not yet led to such an encouraging start.

rayironyrayironyover 2 years ago
A story in

Little laborious stepletts

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 1 year ago

Love the patient, slow way that the possibilities emerge!

triplefliptripleflip42 minutes ago

I'm looking forward to the auther "fleshing out" (pun intended) the 749 weird start

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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