All Comments on 'A Good Marriage Ch. 01'

my only complaint is that it was too short. :) Thanks for writing.

Great story. It also could be included in the romance group.

Will there be a sequel since she's being use to men around her all to the time, and eventually cheats on him whether she really wanted to or not. One of those things that just happened, and she winds up with some big cock in her pussy.......Thanks for the good story....Rich

You have to first realize that he is from Ohio. I don't know if you have ever been to Ohio or not, but the olny thing a person can do there is to jerk his little paddy whaker off. He is wantng you to give him some ammunition for his fantasies. Oh did I mention that is what the males do. The wives just prowl the hotels hoping to fuck a real man from out of state. Any way keep Carrie pure andkeep them happily married and fucking each other only for ever..Thanks

....have been titled "A good Start". A little too early to say it's a good marriage without calling it chapt.1 Just get to the sex and digdaddy will be happy-pistolpackinpete

.....now I look blind!-pistolpackinpete

pistolpackinpete and others. I didn't (can't yet) add anything, but I have an edit in the pipeline to add Chapter 1 to the title. Sorry it got by me the first time.

It's shaping up to be about 10 chapters so I hope you all enjoy it.

jomar

Could have had a little more about the chase, but a good read. You have a nice story started here, please don't think you have to follow other authors and make this a cheating wife or husband story. I for one would like to read a well written romance story. The genre is "Loving Wives" not cheating sluts, but that's what seems to be posted now. Lead us away from that and put the love back into Loving Wives. Literotica can make a new category called Cheating Wives for all those that get off on that type of story. Thanks and keep up the good work.

A bit breezy from meeting to marriage. Paragraphs could be sharper in places. For example, you mention they got married and left on honeymoon in the middle of a paragraph rather than starting a paragraph with this important news. Excellent dialogue.

Nice. It begs more though.

Cute.

Seems there is a lot of comments on why you went so quick from meeting to marriage. To me, the title says it all. It's not about the meeting...it's about the marriage. I've read this when I know there is more out there to read, thank God, because I like the story and want to see it continue.

Good short story - a long dump of emotions

Sorry - previous comment got bollixed up from another story. This one is great and am waiting for next chapter