All Comments on 'A Good Neighbor'

I'm not sure if the content of the story was good or not as the multitude of grammatical errors made this unreadable. I'll take a leap and guess that English is not your primary language? Keep writing, but please find someone to proof-read it first.

The story was great and I can't wait for the next one but please do get an editor. It shouldn't be to complicated to just clean this up a bit.

Rated you great, but need an editor!!

Agree about the grammar but loved the concept of the story. I fantasise about such a situation all the time.

Chris

What a ballbuster is what you are!! I love much the sex story and the people who do the fucking. I love also your impudence is so cute and the humor that you have. Yes to get an editor and then he goes to your home and is a cocksucker. Perfect yes? Pleasse do more...

Not a bad story, but it REALLY needs editing, the grammar is terri8ble, takes away from the story.

Good story, really needs an English tutor.

I am sorry about the grammar. I took it to English teacher who is teaching how to write. She wouldn't read it once cause it sexual. So I do the best I can. Suggestions any one?

I usually don't comment on selling or punctuation, but feel I have to. The plot of your story is good,but with all of the grammar errors, it was hard to follow. Try to get someone to audit your writing.

Huge turn on! Makes this curious guy even more curious!

Really good story and don’t worry about the grammar. It will come in time, just get some begging

English and ask friends to help.

Had a friend that never knew I am bi if I’d give him a BJ., the look on his face when he asked and

I got on my knees. "Priceless"

Need an editor to help with wording and spelling, but the story was interesting.