All Comments on 'A Good Son in Law'

Nice story.

Thanks for writing.

Wish my mother in law would let me help with her business. ;)

Thanks again.

Good introduction. You take the reader right into the action without a lot of extraneous and useless information. Ahem! A word to the wise though: you need to be on guard about your spelling. I found the word "anything" written as anythign - twice. And you used the word "sequel" when you meant squeal, when it was Marcy's turn to go at it with her son-in-law. Good luck in further submissions.

It's like I was watching a movie.