All Comments on 'A Good Start'

by JabnAnyone

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
so beautiful...

and so sensual. Your comparison of the sexual act with playing the keys on a piano - it's just so erotic and amazing. Loved it! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
An amazing story

An amazing story. So much feeling and sensitivity. The setting at the beach was so romantic and erotic. I'd love to see more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Breath-taking

I've never read something so deep and passionate. You are great.

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