All Comments on 'A Gradual Seduction'

Nicely done. "Indian English" differs somewhat from standard English. Taking that into account, the writing is fine. Please proofread your work, though. There were a couple of spelling errors.

Ya, the story was a reflection of sheer expression of long felt feelings for the sister in law. Me too identify with the author, having had wonderful sex with my sister in law. Having sex with sister in law is always satisfying and rejuvenating because you can compare the body/figure/features of the two sisters while having sex with each. You can feel the warmth of vagina of one while fucking the other and enjoy both. Sis in laws are raw and by fucking them you relive the sex you had for the first time with her elder sister. I mean, it cannot be expressed in words. Just do it......Raj