All Comments on 'A Graduation Gift For My Brother'

Well writtten and the sexual suspense kept up my interest until the last word. Can't wait until Sis teaches him to eat pussy

Ho yea that great and good story and make more of this chapter 2 thanks crh...

Keep this series going, it is a fun, hot story.

I don't think is necessary a sequel, the tale is good enought to be stand alone. But since you did a so good job i hope you'll write more other tales..

keep going!

I really enjoyed the way you took your time to let the heat build up and told a story about two people who love and enjoy each other, even if circunstance has them related by blood. Well done. Ronnie W.

Interesting, well written story with wonderful characters and hot sex! Very enjoyable!

Very well written. Seduction is the key to any erotica and you did an excellent job there. Could use some improvement in the dialog during sex though. The 'talk dirty' thing only goes so far before it becomes ridiculous and unbelievable. Thanks for a great story though.

Very hot and very realistic, one of the best sibling incest stories I have read. You should do more in this genre! Next time, how about having a younger sister seduce an older brother. Maybe employing a striptease with "nice girl" clothes. I would love to read that, well done anyway..

A nice, well written story, which can stand alone without a sequel. But you could have described the siblings a bit more. Of course, you can leave that to the reader's imagination, but I prefer descriptions, since that's a possibility to create more erotic atmosphere. Of course, if you have something new in mind like, for example, both falling in love with each other and planning to set up a separate family by making a baby, a sequal would be great. Then this might be a reason for a maximum vote...

Hermit

je suis français et votre histoire est tres realiste,j'ai maintenant envie de baiser ma grande soeur car elle a 32 ans et moi 30 ans ,je me suis masturbé pendant des heures aavec cette histoire mmmmm ,un régal bravo

I write a bit myself but as I read I was filled with envy at the quality of this story.

Thanks

PS - Let it stand alone to try to add to it would diminish it

A well written and intelligent story that actually reaches some truth in the fact sibling incest is far more common than is realised.

That story really turned me on! That's the

best Graduation gift !!

I'm a fan of elder sis younger bro incest. This is the best incest story I've read so far. Keep it up. As everyone wrote, this story stands alone, do not write a Ch_2 unless you feel its way better!! Write more elder sis stories. In this story, the part where they behaved as lovers during their first beach walk was most romantic and more so when the bro was kinda innocent and the sis had to teach him (even to join her in shower :) )Waiting for more elder sis stories from you. Next time, you could have two elder sis.

By the way, just thought, I'm a fan of Amazon love too - why not make your girls bigger. :)

I thoroughly enjoyed your elder sis/younger brother tale. This is one of the most well written stories I have encountered, especially in this genre. Thanks for sharing your considerable talent.

it's silly, humorous, serious, tongue in cheek, romantic, and "realistic" sounding, yes

fantastic story you should write a second part

I really enjoyed this story. I feel like it moved to them having thought about each other too quickly and then proceeded to them being with each other just as fast. I don't think it should have taken the whole week for things to happen but maybe another day or two with some interesting incidents in between. But that is me. I still thoroughly enjoyed this and would like to read more. I definitely liked her plans to educate him.

"""Shit! Oh my god!!" He gasped at the sensation that was unlike any he'd ever felt before. He felt his sister's tongue dancing all over his cock, along with the moist warmness every time she drove it inside her mouth and sucked.""

@@@ I just don't get the supposed mind blowing blow-jobs that you always read about. Ive never really been impressed by a blow-job, they're nice, but nothing to write home about. Same thing for most sex, its usually between ok and really good, but thats about it. Hell, even my first time, when we were finished and I was laying there catching my breath, I thought 'this is what all the hype and build-up was about?' It was kind of anticlimactic.@@@

""In his naiveness, Jimmy failed to warn her, but Susan didn't mind. Instead, she buried her brother's cock down her throat to its root, relaxing her throat and deep-throating him easily, as she used her hands on his ass to drive him down her throat!""

@@@ Sounds like sister needs to educate him as they go so he doesnt lose his next girlfriend the first time they have sex, lol. Dont hold her head forcefully and dont force it in or it'll be the last blow-job she ever gives you! Always tell her you're cumming or the same thing may happen, lol. @@@

""Jimmy almost came when he felt the moist, hot feeling of his sister's pussy enveloping his cock. But he was able to hold back, having orgasmed just recently.""

@@@ See, I just don't get that, how fucking high strung and over sensitive do you have to be to feel like you're going to cum, just from putting it in? Usually with me its the opposite, I have to work and concentrate on the sex to get enough sensitivity to have an orgasm... Hell lots of times I just dont! i had sex with my wife yesterday afternoon before we went out to dinner, went down on her and licked her clit while I curled my middle finger up inside her and stroked her g-spot front to back, building up speed as she did, until she exploded! ;). Then I fucked her, alternating between slow full strokes for a while, then hard and fast, back and forth. I stopped after about thirty minutes since my arms were getting a bit tired and I knew I wouldn't get there today, and she was starting to get sore in one spot anyway (even though it was plenty wet)... Actually I don't mind having sex/making love sometimes and not cumming, its nice just being together! ...though I almost always make sure to go down on her so she cums, usually first because if I put it off till after I fuck her my hormone level crashes and Im just not as interested for a while, lol... That and if I cum in her, by the time I lay there and catch my breath for a while, her cum and mine have cooled a bit and it just had a weird taste... Kinda like that liquid smoke for BBQ'ing, if you've ever tasted that, hehe. So now if I do it after ai usually grab a warm washcloth first, heh. Sometimes Ill stop in the middle of fucking and go down on her, then go back to fucking, thats fun! Wups, think I got chatty on this clip! Hehe @&@

""Jimmy was painfully mauling his sister's breasts without realizing it, but the pain was a pleasant contrast to the incredible pleasure Susan was feeling as her second orgasm within minutes approached.""

@@@ yep, thats another lesson, lots of girls hate rough treatment of their breasts and nipples! That'll piss em off fast! Heh. Ask first before you go twisting, pulling, biting, hehe!@@@

"""Ugh!!" Jimmy groaned, as he continued pounding his cock into his sister's pussy. "I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna cum in my sister's pussy! I'm fucking my sister and I'm gonna cum in your pussy sis! Ugh!! Ah!!! Fuck!!!!"""

@@@ Still trying to get my girl talkative during sex, shes just so damned fucking quiet!! Been trying by saying stuff myself, hoping she'll jump in, but she'll only barely whisper something out if I ask her something :/ @@@

"""Yes, it was much, much better than the beach," Susan answered, turning sideways to face him and snuggling into her brother's side. "You're a wonderful lover, little brother! You just need practice!" She added.""

@@@ still gotta explain to the tard about cumming ahead of time before you fuck... You'd think a 21 y.o. Would know that even if he was a Virgin! Lol. @@@

"""Yes, Jimmy, I'm on the pill. Don't over analyze it! You'll be able to fuck me whenever you want, except when I'm on my period!" ""

@@@ Hell, Im not shy, Ill fuck a girl and go down on her while shes on her period, doesn't bother me, in fact I think its kinda hot!! (Still remember the first time I did that!;)@@@

"""Obviously, I don't have to tell you that no one…and I mean no one…finds out about us! You…tell…NO ONE!"""

@@@ Thats like every brothers wet dream, having a hot sister that wants you to fuck her all the time AND having a safe place to do it!! Lol. @@@

"""I know, I know. I just had to say it. But more importantly," she added, "you have to start dating, little brother! You need to start going out and having a good time! Big sister will teach you everything you need to know about fucking and pleasing a woman. But the minute we meet someone, we're done. Understood?"""

@@@ well that sucks the fun out of it! ...bet that rule changes after they've been fucking for a while. 'Brother, my BF went fishing with his dad this weekend! He just called from the lake. Get your cock over here NOW little man!!' Hehe @@@

The sister is about ten years older than he is, but he was assisting her with calc/econ at when he was about ten years old? I don't think so. He was a 21 year old virgin, but acted like he was 12. It took away from potentially a good read.

I could've used one myself, growing up an only child. Probably made me a better man, but a situation like this story would've dispensed with the learning curve.

Good story.

Love how she was educating her younger brother to be a good lover for some future gal. And cutting him loose when he was in a serious relationship. Truly loving sister and a lucky younger brother. 5 Stars.

"A Graduation Gift For My Brother:" - Thirty Year Old Sister, Susan Watson and Twenty-one Year Old College Graduate, James "Jimmy" Watson.

Unfortunately, my feeling is that sister "Suzy" has conveniently used her little brother Jimmy because he was convenient, a willing young virgin is another "notch" for his mature sister's accomplishments. Due to their age difference of just over nine (9) years between older sister and younger brother, they don't have the usual closeness of love and attachment that closer-aged siblings seek and enjoy.

This unusual incestuous sex did not have the intimacy of most closer siblings; never the less, the sex was great and wanton...it gave older sis Susan the opportunity to teach virgin brother Jimmy how to specifically please her sexually. I'm disappointed there was not more intimacy and greater sibling love between a very sexually-mature sister and her much younger, virgin neophyte brother. However, the is great...and my pecker was stiff, hard and oozed some rich cummy sperm.