All Comments on 'A Guy Gets Tired of the Games Ch. 02'

by LaPatitMort

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice

Very, very nice. I enjoyed it.

The only thing I would say is that there needs to be a bit more descriptive text regarding movement. One moment he invites her over and the next line she is there. It's just a bit jarring.

Lena8Lena8over 14 years ago
LOVEDDD IT!!

I just loved how he took her on a trip before The Trip.. to find her inner whore-goddess-woman ...where oh where do I find an older lover like this?? Liked the pace and it is ok that not every single step they take is described! When you have orgasms and sex on your mind do you recall the steps that lead you to heaven? Hell NO!

FuzzypillowFuzzypillowabout 14 years ago
OMG

Fuck me now, just like that. WOW.. I need a man like this. mmm oopsy couldn't hold my shhhing haha i needed to comment. Ok. fuck I need a towel but i'm moving onto Ch.3 lol

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