All Comments on 'A Halloween Party Love Story'

Great character development, particularly since Deena seemed to be the ultimate tease.

Patience and timidity paid off.

Left with a good feeling about the future relationship.

Good development to a hot story; BRAVO!!!

Agree with all the previous qudoes, and must add that the story is a masterpiece. The air of gentleness suffuses the whole story, a wonderful, caring relationship. Bravo. Dan.

real cute! :)

Very nice story, I liked it a lot.

The Gayboy stories are over there -->

I didn't get as emotionally attached to the characters as I felt I should have. Felt like there was a lack of build and depth

<3

Great story

Very nice tale. I liked how it took us through Deena’s apparent development as their friendship grew and particularly how she revealed her surprise for Pauly at the end. It could have been a little more developed but good enough as it is for 5*. Thanks for writing.

Short and sweet!